I am an aspiring screenwriter and a big fan of this show. In the episode Nailed(Season 2, episode 9) Chuck confronts Kim and Jimmy claiming Jimmy changed the Mesa Verde documents. Chuck then says " I can't believe my own brother stabbed me in the back." After that moment I thought Jimmy would mention how Chuck back stabbed him in the past. I decided to write a little more of the scene with Jimmy mentioning that. I would appreciate it if anyone would like to read this writing and review whether or not this would fit with the writing of these characters.
Here is the link to my writing https://drive.google.com/file/d/1YgL9DkOarxq6pcm70TzkoDosOs6Nd3Bg/view?usp=sharing
Submitted December 22, 2019 at 11:36PM by Gcarl1 https://ift.tt/2rosdsa
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