[EVERYTHING] I made a post awhile ago on if the 90s era US military unit teleported into the realm of game of thrones and I got feedback should I make a story on this?

SAMPLE; January 17th 1991 near the Iraq- Saudi Arabian border, A brigade sized Unit gets ready to begin contact with 50 Iraqi tanks attempting to cross the border. “Sir I see the hajis 600 meters out” *Sgt. Randerson aims his M16A2 out in the desert looking through his iron sights he sees nothing, “kid I ain’t seein shit”, “fuck I got nothing now they disappeared” says PFC Reinhardt. In the distance appears a white fog coming over the desert horizon. “Sir is that snow?” Says Reinhardt nervously as he now Aims his rifle toward the ever creeping white mist. “Shitheads burning the fuel in Kuwait don’t be so dumb you guys” Exclaims Private Enfreni. “No were too far from Kuwait. Pt2 (beginning of S2) meanwhile west of kings landing a farmer is tending well his farm. He sees a white mist but ignores it as it is nowhere near him and gathering over a field a little east of him. The farmer proclaims, “oh I forgot I left something down there” as his exhausted body from all the years of farmwork has token a toll on his body as he uses a cane to walk on the scraggly dirt trail.

Meanwhile back in the desert Randerson scrambles to get his RTO (Dawson) over to his hole as the white mist gets closer and closer to there position in the desert. “Raven 6 this is Outlaw 3 come in over” the radio screams to life as units all around them are calling in the same thing, “Raven 6 come in we ha-“ a single shot fires over them as a private from the holes behind them opens fire with a SAW. *Ratta tat tat ratta tat tat goes the SAW as it fires 5.56 bullets at the upcoming mist as another private opens up aimlessly with his M16A2 on burst “bum bum bum” as the rifle unloads rounds on the mist as Randerson and a corporal yell,”CEASEFIRE CEASEFIRE”. soon the commanders are scramble telling the men to stay put and men scrambled tarps over humvees and crews in the Bradley’s hold and wait nervously for orders as the mist engulfs the brigade. should I add more? People? Or leave it at this

Submitted January 26, 2018 at 11:07AM by jlkig http://ift.tt/2DBDmGF