Tuesday, September 28, 2021

[SPOILERS] Quick game of thrones S8 rewrite give criticism

This is gonna be short, with no dialogue. Edit: It actually dragged on sorry

Night King is shown destroying some northern towns in early eps as he makes his way to Winterfell

When he arrives at Winterfell there will be far less snow making it easier to see and Jon will have actual strategy. I'm not a strategist, but let's just go with Jon having great strategy to take on NK. Bran is also utilised. Maybe hire a chess player

NK arrives at Winterfell. Catapults projectiles at Jon army dealing damage. The unsullied and Dothraki have flaming obsidian weapons. Jons armies do better than the original but are still overwhelmed even with his tactics.

Jon/Rhaegal and Daenerys/Drogon are burning the armies when they are attacked by NK/Viserion, they narrowly escape dying. They engage in a similar fight in the original, but the dragons are more distinctly coloured and the shots are taken further away, given an easy understanding of the fight. Rhaegal is wounded, but they knock down the NK.

The wights breakthrough and start entering the city. A relevant character is shown dying. More giants and bears. Once again the defending forces have a little more victory but are overwhelmed.

Rhaegal crash lands and Daenerys flys down. They see NK. Prior, Melisandre enchanted Jons sword to make it a little more NK killer. NK is slightly hurt by the full force of Drogons fire, but barely weakened. Drogon attempts melee but NK hits him away wounding him he summons a shard of ice and throws it at Daenerys, she blocks it with her and but it pierces and wounds her. Drogon notices and flys away. Jon fights NK and does well, but is overwhelmed by his experience and strength. He notices the power of Jons sword and summons some wights including a giant to defend him. He assumes Jon will die and heads to Bran.

Daenerys notices the sheer loss of life and realises they can't win so she rallies a retreat on her dragons. Relevant character dies making sure another one survives.

NK goes walks through Winterfell decimating everyone who comes close to him. He enters the clearing. Bran wargs into someone/something, of strength perhaps a white walker? It falls to NK's blade. Melisandre enters the clearing, burning up what is left of her to wound the white walker generals. She dies. A wounded Jon enters after her and runs to save Bran. He gets into another fight with the NK, this time almost dying until Drogon tail whips him away. Bran and Jon escape on Drogon.

A week later they arrive at Kings Landing and their shape and news of the Night Kings destruction as he heads south convinces Cersei to let them stay and fight. All wildfire is brought out and more manufactured. Many traps are made. Weapons are made and both all armies equipped.

After an episode or two NK arrives and attacks. Wildfire goes off killing a large part of his army but at the same time, Viserion destroys a lot of kings landing. After a lengthy battle, it's just NK, Viserion, white walkers and some wights in an open space vs Jon/Rhaegal, Daenerys/Drogon and relevant characters/mixed remains of armies. Dragons/Jon/Daenerys and NK take to the sky to fight, White Walkers and remaining wights take the rest.

The ground is a blood and bone bath while in the sky is a vicious fight. Rhaegal is flying weakly but Drogon is ferocious and more offensive. Daenerys and NK charge each other both blowing flames, Drogon smashes into Viserion breaking him to bits and knocking down Drogon. Daenerys is killed and NK falls down. The dragons being too wounded to fight, Jon goes for the Nightking and they get into a fight. Once again Jon is losing, but with the help of another character, perhaps Bran wargs into a soldier on the battlements and fires a scorpion outfitted with an obsidian bolt and NK knocking him down, or attempts warging into NK directly messing with his fighting. Either way, Jon with help is able to thrust his sword in the NK, killing him. GG

This destroys the army of the dead, but not the White Walkers. They are killed manually. A change I would like to see implemented is that NK isn't made more powerful than other White Walkers, but is effectively just a smart, more powerful White Walker due to age/experience. This does not eliminate the White Walkers in the north. Weakened, but not gone.

Far later on, Dragon eggs are shown, among other good things. The Night King did his damage, but all is not lost.

Lemme know what you think.



Submitted September 28, 2021 at 06:04AM by bananapeelwastaken https://ift.tt/3F0pLZS

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